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Strengths:

• Amazing soundtrack and storyboard
• Clear story
• Good use of props and camera angles
• Effective opening sound

Improvements:

• Unclear storyline
  
• Credits
• Too short
• Camera angles
• Camera work
• Better use of props and locations
  

Thriller Conventions

• The crime at the core of our narrative is Stalking which leads to murder.
• We did a close shot of the knife which is used in the murder, this becomes a clue later on.
• There are a lot of enigmas that need to be resolved, such as who are the two characters.
• Our extraordinary situation is that the girl is murdered in an ordinary situation.
• Our film has a theme of voyeurism as Alex plays a pervert who thrives off killing young girls.
• This is our antagonist's flaw as he cannot help but kill young girls that he likes the look of.
• We have a scene in which the protagonist is in peril and the last one when we see her dead.
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Location and Shots

Location:
Long Road, woods at back of college

Shots:

• Long shot of Abi through trees, zooms in slowly.
• Long shot of Abi walking round corner and Alex getting off bench and following her.
• Medium shot of Abi (starts off screen) walking past woods and alex running behind her and dragging her into woods.
• Long shot of Abi running from Alex through trees.
• Medium shot of Alex from Behind. Zooms in on knife and then zooms out when he starts running.
• Medium to close shot of Abi tied up in ditch, pans across to show blood on tree and zooms in to face.
• Black screen with title.